when we were looking at the stars,
and you said that even though it was a magnificent sight,
you would rather look at me for just a moment,
than all the stars in the universe for the rest of your life?
and you said that even though it was a magnificent sight,
you would rather look at me for just a moment,
than all the stars in the universe for the rest of your life?
I remember that.
as I sit here on my bed,
staring at the plastic stars that hang from my ceiling,
I have to wonder...
Did you really mean it?
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Math class ramblings.
Not about anything in particular.
I hate how you brush off people telling you that your poetry is bad by saying you know it's bad. if you truly knew that you wouldn't make a fucking website out of it for all the world to see.
ReplyDeleteOr maybe she's embarassed that someone is being so awful, rather than stating why they dont like it, they are just saying that it is shit. People do have feelings you know, idiot. Like clapping your hands in front of someone's face and saying 'haha you blinked. If you say something bitchy, the person probably will have feelings about it. Maybe she wants constructive criticism.
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